How does this sound so far?

Its very good. but very abrupt, unless this is just bits and pieces posted here. Some of my advice would be to add some character descriptions. I think it would be good if you gave a little more background on Abagail and Johnny. Why did they get in a fight? why did he want to break up with her? And why is Abagail so fast at just talking to Jacob? Think about it this way, would you talk to someone you just met on the street even if they were your age? I think its a very good story but needs a lot more character development. Keep it up though =) Your amazing for being only thirteen!